tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7916139985602505901.post7783817738693196422..comments2019-12-16T20:55:43.274+13:00Comments on Auahatanga o Otahuhu: How the Cheetah came to be, by Jerry.Miss Burthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06061596354895403189noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7916139985602505901.post-85346464752248210062011-05-27T12:22:11.156+12:002011-05-27T12:22:11.156+12:00Jerry, nice explanation of how the Cheetah was cre...Jerry, nice explanation of how the Cheetah was created. I think you tied the ideas in your story together nicely, and next time we can work more on the punctuation. Great start!Miss Burthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06061596354895403189noreply@blogger.com