tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7916139985602505901.post8199683551130114038..comments2019-12-16T20:55:43.274+13:00Comments on Auahatanga o Otahuhu: Last sting, by AtionMiss Burthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06061596354895403189noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7916139985602505901.post-62962180899575772252010-10-28T19:50:43.119+13:002010-10-28T19:50:43.119+13:00Hi Ation
You are certainly one of a creative bunch...Hi Ation<br />You are certainly one of a creative bunch. I was impressed by the way you were able to weave a story around a scientific fact - this is what myths are made of.<br />A thought - sometimes less information means more impact.<br /><br />Well done and thanks for sharing your work.<br /><br />Mr K<br />MastertonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7916139985602505901.post-10659880078947608532010-10-28T15:09:06.498+13:002010-10-28T15:09:06.498+13:00Hi Ation,
This is a beautifully written story, I w...Hi Ation,<br />This is a beautifully written story, I was very impressed with the language and the voacab you used. Well done! Next time you could make a more explicit link between the story, and why all bees die when they sting creatures.Miss Burthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06061596354895403189noreply@blogger.com