tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7916139985602505901.post8690969377998909581..comments2019-12-16T20:55:43.274+13:00Comments on Auahatanga o Otahuhu: How The Flowers Were Formed, by ShinalMiss Burthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06061596354895403189noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7916139985602505901.post-1949650825035372022010-10-28T12:09:27.627+13:002010-10-28T12:09:27.627+13:00Powerful dude.Powerful dude.Tasha and Yeomanshttp://otahuhucollege.school.nznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7916139985602505901.post-42390978675455514342010-10-28T12:02:29.823+13:002010-10-28T12:02:29.823+13:00It's David commenting. I find the concept of t...It's David commenting. I find the concept of this story to be entertaining and Ih ave to say that this story is great.<br /><br />However, I see a lack of detail in some areas. I felt the introduction could use more length.<br /><br />Nice story. :DK34https://www.blogger.com/profile/03407843965864244236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7916139985602505901.post-22932997559831895422010-10-28T11:53:40.919+13:002010-10-28T11:53:40.919+13:00Wow. That story was amazing! I like the way you sh...Wow. That story was amazing! I like the way you show your creativity through story writing. KEEP ON KEPPING ON.Ation Mitihepinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7916139985602505901.post-87683109747766956522010-10-28T10:22:01.972+13:002010-10-28T10:22:01.972+13:00Dear Shinal,
We liked reading your explanation abo...Dear Shinal,<br />We liked reading your explanation about how flowers were formed. We are glad that the woman got some flowers because otherwise she would have had the most horrible life.<br />From Kate and Jack at Grey Lynn School.Kate and Jackhttp://glshamilton.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7916139985602505901.post-32396179123595213562010-10-27T21:38:03.941+13:002010-10-27T21:38:03.941+13:00Hi Shinal,
Well done on writing such a beautiful s...Hi Shinal,<br />Well done on writing such a beautiful story. I was impressed with how quickly you wrote this story, and your illustrations. I think flowers were a great choice to write about. Next time you could think about making the story longer so you can explain things in more detail.<br />Really great work!Miss Burthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06061596354895403189noreply@blogger.com